Synopsis - Draft Two Notes

With the second synopsis, the conclusion was made that the story was making progress. The story had moved on from it's first version, with a completely new story arc and characters being involved. I had also moved further away from the theme of suicide, and dealing with death, into a completely new, more positive direction. The recurring theme within the new story arc is one of personal ingenuity, and dealing with a problem faced.
However, the synopsis is still missing an obvious moral dilemma. The character does not have to make an actual choice, and is instead, thrust into a situation which they have to deal with. In the next synopsis, I will have to make sure that I endeavour to add in a moral dilemma. Without this moral dilemma, the story is missing a key element, meaning that it isn't as accomplished as it could be, but is also missing a key part of Marylin Milgrom's ten point plan.